Man has no essence of destroying any one.................women also do the same much profoundly and elegantly...........Its not about sexes , its about the heart.........and If some body can't be a father/Mother then there is always a history behind it............................Lets not criticize someone just because we believe that he/she is that way...............................................But i liked last two lines "
Don't destroy someone,
Just because, you can.
Its certainly give a sense of proud and fear inside a heart which is the worst enemy of human race........................................Sorry if I have written something sarcastic...:-).....................But you have written beautiful 4 liner :-)
I like it! I took a deep breath and expected to read a long poem and instead, I enjoyed a short but power-packed piece. I love the sentiment behind this one, and the rhyme gave it exactly what it needed to make the message strong and clear. I read it out loud to my boyfriend (who's also a writer), and he said, "Hey! That's really good." I agreed. I enjoyed reading.
KH
P.S. Thanks for the reviews before.
Wow! powerful. With power comes responsibility, indeed. I can relate about the father thing too. Fathering has been a very Zen experience for me. After being a father I came to realise that loving kindness and softness has actually made me stronger in ways that I never new possible.
Direct and honest words. A real man will repair his mistakes and do what is right. To be a strong man today. Take education and wise decisions. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Hi!
Trying to reconnect with you guys and myself through poetry, after a long time.
Excited to read the amazing stuff around here.
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