Wow, you do have a way with words. Each line teaches one thing and each verse opens one's eye into something. :D I'm so glad to read a fresh new poem from a new friend. And I'm glad that more than words, there's a poet's heart evident in every word. What a flow of emotions. Nice piece of work. :)
A powerful and beautiful poem. Your words are true. A wise person can see the beauty in a new day. Best day of life is holding his child. Find laughter and joy over pain and sadness. Thank you for the positive poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Aww, the questions you put forth were so witty and honest. I love the uplifting sense, and also there's this overall idea, How can we question life? and the answer would be this poem as a whole. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, it just made the poem very rhythmic and fun to read. However, I just found one shortcoming, the last part just felt a little incomplete, I mean, it just didn't feel like the right ending. Like, you were talking about feelings and stuff till now, and then the sun comes out of nowhere, maybe it could be something that sybolizes sun? like, say, pride? or life, or something that would bring back the idea of the poem, and that would make this already brilliant poem, further brilliant. I congratulate you on this great achievement, you have a great way of thinking. Keep writing!
Hi!
Trying to reconnect with you guys and myself through poetry, after a long time.
Excited to read the amazing stuff around here.
If you happen to go through my writing, I hope it's worth your.. more..