Some of us

Some of us

Some of us are too scared too fly,

Some of us, with broken wings try..

Some of us don't let others in,

We build the walls so high,

Some of us with bruised hands too,

Move the bricks, without a sigh..

Some of us accept everything, 

Saying its meant-to-be,

Some of us challenge and fight,

What they call, destiny.

Some of us don't dance,

Because we are too scared to fall,

Some of us without partners too,

Jump and trip and try the waltz.

Some of us don't love,

Believing, its too risky an affair,

Some of us with broken hearts too,

Bless the feeling, in our prayers.

Author's Note

A random piece from my diary!
Critique is welcome.

Reviews

[Kes]

This is great!
I really like your writing. There's something eminently human about how you write and what you write about. For someone who's always trying to seem unhuman and detached, it's great to read a really human, touching pieces.
You write well!
K

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

And when these some of us when joins together.......makes the world entertaining..........when these some collects the courage to move in same direction..creates the magic.

Nice thoughts and very nicely written poem :-)

[Kuhr Gred]

:) excellent write my friend.. appropriate explanation! FULL RATE :D

[Tomislav Petricevic]

This is a great poem. I realized I personally know every type of person you described here, and I can find myself in some of the lines too.
An excellent write.

[h d e rushin]

Prayer is the culmination of the try of everything. good word choices in
the final stanza...

[Chesney W.]

a very beautiful write!! its like, people who need to try, dont.. and those who have done so much, try......excellent!!

[Amata Luna]

Wow Suditi, this is a very good piece. :) I appreciate the way words rhyme and how each flows in harmony. Though this is a random piece, it seemed to come altogether in one place. The words are just like truth to me. Beautiful. This is a beautiful piece. An ingenuity from another creative writer. Thanks for sharing. =)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to release pain and sadness. I learn the hard way. Better to walk softly and speak with kind words and thoughts. Every action had a reaction good and bad. A beautiful poem. much to think about in the powerful words and thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[reflectingus]

I can sense two different characters here- those who try, and those who don't. If put in simple words, I might just say good and bad, but that doesn't mean being a bit more firm would make you the bad guy. These are two universally accepted personalities, though I guess I'm mostly a blend. I love this poem, it's definitely different, but states the truth in a lovely manner. I particularly enjoyed the third stanza, that's where I actually desired to be a free soul, and in this way, this poem is very uplifting and inspirational. Great job.

[$êlvån]

this is it...perfectly presented one..when everything works well this is wat comes up..
Provoking one..cheers