Strong alone.

We are all alone, but we don't have to be lonely.

Strong alone

As the pages revealing secrets, turn,

As heaps and heaps of memories, burn..

We know each line is gonna bring cruel truths, 

we had always tried to hide inside,

The memories will come after us,

Even those, which we thought,

we had left behind..

The moon was often cold and mean,

But as we start doubting the sun..

The frowning faces were always there,

But as the loving masks, come undone,

We realize, nobody is ours forever,

Not even our shadow,

Yes, thats right..

Because like an unfaithful friend, 

it doesn't stick with us,

when its complete dark or excessive bright..

There are only two inseparable  lovers, 

I've been able to find,

One is the heart,

The other is the mind.

Yes, they quarrel over and over again,

Cause a chaos, even when the motive is the same,

But whenever the heart is weak,

the mind takes the lead, and guides it through,

And whenever the logic, the rational, fails,

and it needs console and strength, 

The heart comes to its rescue..

And it is, when we start to believe,

 We are strong,

We learn to care less about the things gone wrong,

And when we stop segregating the tears and the smiles,

We start taking in our ever so surprising,

Yet wonderful lives.

Author's Note

Critique and comments are welcome!

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

heart will win at the end...
Really nicely done poem..
Especially the ending is awesome!!
I agree with you completely we need partners
but if we don't have them ..its fine
Move on in life..life is full of great things:)

[Ramya]

I love the "two inseparable lovers" part...too good! And a really good poem.

[Kuhr Gred]

like i said last time in your poems! this is amazing :) I love this.. while reading this, i remember one of my best friend told me, "Be strong even I'm not in your side" :) i saw myself here in this poem.. keep it up :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"There are only two inseparable lovers,
I've been able to find,
One is the heart,
The other is the mind."
You hold great wisdom. Many statements stood out in this poem.
"And whenever the logic, the rational, fails,
and it needs console and strength,
The heart comes to its rescue.."
We must lead with love and kindness to know calm and peace in a life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

where ........... heart meets mind.............the result is magical, it doesn't happen all he time............People call it a "Passion".............passion towards anything.....may be reading, writing, playing, loving etc. I wish everybody mind and heart synchronize...in the way written in this poem.............Beautiful :-)

[Hotwater]

Brilliant!... such poetry!

*bird*

[$êlvån]

best started one......slowed one in the middle but again it stood up to the mark.:)cheers:)

[$êlvån]

awesome one...keep it up..

[Eleanor]

Wow..This was outstanding! Amazing job
-Eleanor

[FJ Davis]

A well-expressed, well-presented portrayal of an internal mechanism--a kind of marriage--which encourages and reflects self-love; the fountainhead from which all love naturally flows
Outstanding work, Suditi!