Untitled III

touch it
take it in
all the way
yes
feel
this
burning in your veins
take it
just like that
don't let it go
it's the only
thing holding
us together
i
can
feel
you
in
there
i want to feel this
one more time
to know it's real
that i'm alive
living
in this
surreal
dream
of your design
can't
let
go
of
this delusion i've held
for so damned long
of something that might
just
be
real
enough
to hold through the night
like a lost love
i'll never see again
there's nothing to bring
to bring us once more
to
the
forefront
of
some
divine
moment in sweat
and passion that
will never taste so sweet
or be so good
as the real thing
take
it
in
this delusion that is mine.

Reviews

[wizthom]

beautiful but u took away from the glory with those one word lines,
that should have been a sentence, made it hard t keep the feeling going as the reader,
but emotions are there,good write ,correct the one worders and it will be a erotic write,peace wizthom