NEver

tired of living in this world
made wholely out of spite
a slight against nature
this is where we are
a failed mutation
a close-ended evolution
nothing ever egged us on
nothing lit a fire
smack this lighter open
against your skull
cracking in the rain
pouring blood from the heavens
you
never
needed this
you
never
needed me
i am just your favourite joke
and you're my scar
touch this truth for what it is
crush this truth for what it is
you never knew the world
could ever taste like this
i bleed your innocence
and rip you in half
you're a f**k and a disease
i feel the breeze
coming through this hole
that is in my head
but i've a secret,
just for you
you
never
needed this
you
never
needed me
and i don't care anymore
just don't give a good goddamn
you're a virus bleeding into my veins
no cure - NO CURE
i hate you
i hate you
i hate you
you failed f*****g freak
trying to shock the world
you're just a disease
with your 'pretty please'
never knew you were like this
show me your true face
number to all of this
apathetic gaze pouring from these eyes
i never knew the end would be like this
i never knew...
never thought i'd be the end of the world
not the be all / end all
but something in between that
and all the nothingness you left
this chasm in my chest
bleeding ice through my veins
i know the truth
you could never tell
you
never
needed this
you
never
needed me

Reviews

[F. Nazarov]

AmaZiiiiing piece.
I think I was just staring at the screen
with my mouth hanging open.
How you so successfully portrayed all of your emotions,
and your diction was excellent by the way.
Your use of vocabulary also blew my away,
and everything was just perfect.
I especially liked:

you could never tell
you
never
needed this
you
never
needed me

EXCELLENT!!!! Once again, I really enjoyed reading this piece.