hanging on the lips of the dead

hanging on the lips of the dead

A Poem by Subliminal Silence

dried and brittle roses
hanging on the lips of the dead
like the words cast in neon
down the interstate of our lives
flicked into the stream
and just as never ending
there is nothing more here
i'm all out of words for you
you do not trust nor will ever
it's just the way it is.

© 2008 Subliminal Silence


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Its so cryptic and dark. The first two lines give me a superb visual. I just adore this piece! It flows so nicely. Nice work!

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Subliminal Silence
Subliminal Silence

Indianapolis, IN



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Photographer by nature, writer by design. Not much to know about I, I've been writing for as long as I can remember, since I was a wee little child, first thing I started was with my father, actuall.. more..

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