Shiny Things

A Poem by SublimeChaos

~He gives me Shiny things~

Scream/listen to their mystery

Bottle up my weary/teary eyed feelings

Imagery unseen,

He gives me shiny things

Blank/fumble through the black

Strike a match/illuminate my path

Lick/press/blow

he gives me shiny things,

Sleep/faintly echo through my dreams

Cold/alone/shattered vision of my soul

No, no, take it slow

Unravel my misery/plead for mercy

He gives me Shiny things.

© 2009 SublimeChaos

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Legacy

SublimeChaos,

Overall - every write flowing from who you are, indeed a stepping stone in the right direction.

I am a bit confused I must say - Understanding eludes me...

Interesting play on words -

Keep it up

Legacy

Posted 15 Years Ago

0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Bhavya Kaushik

This is really beautiful and flowed so flawlessly!
I loved your writing style a lot, its very appealing...
great write overalll..

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 3, 2009
Last Updated on March 3, 2009

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SublimeChaos

Ventura, CA

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"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." I believe that there is no absolute to anything in life. I know who I am and I have no re.. more..