The Memory of a Rainy Day

The Book of Fantasies

Entry Number 1

The Memory of a Rainy Day

It's Raining today too,

Why do you look so sad?

Do you dislike the Rain?

Don't be sad, I'll let  you go under my umbrella.

The Rain isn't that bad.

I like the Rain,

Whether it's strong or calm.

I don't mind being a bit wet from the Rain.

The Rain is still pouring down strongly.

But it will stop later.

When it does, let's play outside together.

Don't be sad, listen to the sound of the Rain makes.

「There is nothing to worry about, Onee-chan is fine」

「Onee! Right now is not the time for jokes」

「I am not joking, Onee-chan is really fine.....」

「I understand, I'll wait」

「Don't worry, Onee-chan will be with you forever.....」

Author's Note

A review is much appreciated, Much obliged

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

What a beautiful poem. I loved it. :)

[Luximir]

Love it! So cute and adorable! Want more :D

[Laura Lynn]

really beautiful sounds and rhythm; I like the refrain like a song. I should try to incorporate this technique in a poem with my languages learning word memorization which is painfully minimal. But I take it as a challenge at least

[Kurayami]

This piece of writing is cute. I cannot really say why but the word "cute" just came to me after reading this chapter.

~Kurayami

[yuki]

wow just amazing truly good