Gamble

Gamble

A Chapter by ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀

The Time Forest:The God of Fantasies:Chapter 1:Gamble

Next Heaven 2 has Two stories going in it.The Story will be decided if Kuroha picks the first choice,then the story will be in the second choice but if he pick the first choice then the story will be in the first choice.Please bear with me in this double edged story.

When I entered the gate,I was once again in the shop where I met Iroha and Meia,
"Yo,Kuroha.Have some tea" Iroha smiled at me then Meia gave me a cup of tea.The tea cup set is still made out of clock parts but it's different from what I saw when I first came here in this shop,
"Thank you,Meia" I thanked Meia then I sat on a chair in front of Iroha,
"Then,are you going to take the gamble?" Iroha jumped into the serious topic but her face still has a huge bright smile,
"What is the other choice?' I asked Iroha,
"The first choice is Lilian and the second choice is This" Iroha gave me an envelope with a fancy looking candel was stamp on it,
"Lilian is my first priority right now" I picked Lilian,
"Here is a warning:Helping Lilian to obtain her dreams means that throwing every experience you've had so far.Are you still going?" Iroha laughed 
as she warned me,
"Helping Lilian means surpassing you,I'll do what you couldn't do before.Iroha" I stood up and walked towards the door.When I reached the door, Iroha stopped me,
"Kuroha,You can't change other people's future,yes,just like how you can't change what happened to me" Iroha sounded really serious,her eyes was really sharp and her face wasn't kidding.She looks exactly like how I take things seriously.
"I'll remember it,that is my goal.Do what you couldn't do" I opened the door and I was transported in front of my house.

I was speechless when I thought that she might be in the house waiting for me just like always.With that on my mind,I immediately dashed towards the door and opened it.When I opened it,there she was....Mom,in her Magical Girl cosplay.Mom looks like she never age,she looks the same as she was when she was in High School.When Mom,noticed me,she ran towards me like always,
"Hello,Kuroha.Do you want food,bath or ....ME?" She acted like how a little girl would want to say to her husband,
"That is gross,Mom!" I yelled at my Mom and she looked really disappointed,
"Sorry,just kidding" She then returned back to her normal smile and she went back to the kitchen.

I am glad that I get to see her again.

To be continued in Chapter 2:Lilian Aadelheart


© 2014 ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀


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A review is much appreciated,Much Obliged

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I understand that you don't write much but maybe one paragraph in each chapter describing the setting can help the audience get a better picture about the setting.

~Kurayami

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10 Years Ago

I'll tell you just in case,The room was already describe in the previous novel.
great story and hope to read more :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Fantastic piece of writing and great story. I'd have organised the sentence structure a little differently, but that's just me! I like a fairly complex sentence structure. There are a few grammar mistakes and a couple of spelling mistakes that I noticed. Other than that keep up the great work.

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