The Time Forest
A Book by ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀
 Lilian Route and back to a different dimension of Next Heaven Academy  © 2014 ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀
Author's Note
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A review is much appreciated,Much obliged
My novels have many grammar mistakes because I think in japanese when I write my things so shut up about the grammar mistakes! try translating japanese to english just with your mind,it's hard! I am doing my best on writing this! so treat other writers how you wanted to be treated in a good way
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I read the entire series till the current one. The first thing that comes to my mind is the story and timeline is pretty messy. I know that kuroha is the god of time but can you atleast make it understandable on why those events happened on the first part in every book. Like the ice heaven arc, where the rich girl's father killed Io and Alice who should be a normal person. And I'm pretty sure io is pretty strong person, so how the heck did kizuna's father killed him?
And why do kuroha need to connect the worlds? What reason do kuroha and iroha have to fight? Is Io the one who killed His mother? Why did Kuroha ended up on Knight's Cross Academy? Is Lillian the one on the fragmentation dream and Lilian from time forest, same person? And lastly what other stories is kuroha in?
I think I could answer my questions if I re read the entire series but I'm too lazy for that. But please answer my questions as many as you could. Please and Thank you.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
The Question where you asked that why is the timeline messed up, the answer is I wrote it that way p.. read moreThe Question where you asked that why is the timeline messed up, the answer is I wrote it that way purposely so I could make a proper ending for the Unknown New World Series.
Second: Kuroha and Iroha didn't fight, Kuroha just wanted to encourage Iroha about continuing what she couldn't do in the past.
The World Connection, I can't tell you that one yet.
Io did killed his mother but he was oblivious that he did it.
The Lilian from the Fragmentatio Dream and The Lilian in The Time Forest are the same person.
Kuroha appears at some chapter of Reverse Code and Magician's NIght
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10 Years Ago
Seriously, I'm not sure which one comes first, the idol arc or the ice heaven arc? If it was on the .. read moreSeriously, I'm not sure which one comes first, the idol arc or the ice heaven arc? If it was on the idol arc, why would kuroha been waiting to connect with trinity, and when it was on the ice heaven arc, he wanted to see yuna concert even though yuna already quitted being an idol?
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10 Years Ago
And it was Izumi that i meant who fought with kuroha
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10 Years Ago
And again, the reason why Izumi and Kuroha fought will be explained in the end
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Added on August 8, 2014
Last Updated on August 10, 2014
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