First Week,Kohinata Izumiko

First Week,Kohinata Izumiko

A Chapter by ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀

Azul+Noelle-Yo~~! Welcome to Noelle and Azul's Character Introduction Radio~~!


Azul+Noelle-We will explain what this short intro and stuff.
Azul-Basically we,will have guess characters from other novels and have them introduce themselves,oh! we will ask one questione per character.
Noelle-But first,we will introduce ourselves,starting from me,Noelle Gran.


Noelle-My name is Noelle Gran,I have a short white straigth long bob cut hair.I have beautiful purple eyes.My three sizes are 84/54/79,the personI like is Kurogane Kuroha,My father.That ideal smile,warm kindness and good way of using his weapons.It makes my heart beat faster.
Azul-It's my turn now.My name is Azul Tenple,I have a super long straight white hair and a blood red colored eyes.My three sizes are 82/54/78,the person I like is Kurogane Kuroha,the same person as Noelle.That soft lips,sweet taste of his saliva and his dreadful eyes that makes me want to just take him with me home~~~
Noelle-Now that our introduction is over,we are moving on to our Guess for today.
Azul-Please come in,Lili-
Noelle-Azul,Shut up for a moment.Our guess for today is The white version of Izumi,Izumiko-san please come in.
Izumiko-Hello~~!The Super Cute Nice Beautiful Perfect Flawless (Pervert) Heroine and The only Heroine for Kuroha-senpai is Here!!!!!!!
Azul-Is it just me or everyone in this Radio studio are biased with Father?
Noelle-Yeah,We are the.........
Azul+Noelle+Izumiko-Kuroha Love Love Team!
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Azul+Noelle+Izumiko-That sound good.
Azul-*Cough*Cough*Okay,let's move on to our next corner.


Character Self-Introduction~~!
Izumiko-My name is Kohinata Izumiko,I was born from Izumi's love for Kuroha-senpai.My three sizes are 89/55/79,I have a long sliky jet black hair and blood red eyes.My height is 152 cm and weight is 47 kg.My motto is "If Kuroha-senpai doesn't love you,then life doesn't love you"
Noelle-This is our question for you,What do you think will happen in Unknown New World's new novel,Fragmentation Dream?
Izumiko-Hmmmm.....Judgng from the trailer I read,Kuroha-senpai will probably finally find his happy ending.
Noelle+Azul-Okay,Okay,please shut up,please don't do things we don't like.


For some reason,we suddenly have technical difficulties,please wait for a moment.
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Noelle+Azul-Okay...........This is for our today's session,Bye bye~~!!!



© 2014 ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀


Author's Note

❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀

We chose this as our cover because it's cute,credits to Piriri

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Interesting set up. Not bad story. Interesting characters. However the formatting, for me, is a mess. It's all over the place. My eyes are being melted by the messiness and colourfulness of it. It just needs a bit of tidying up to be honest. And I'm not really sure what this is either. Is it a play, is it a screenplay or is it a piece of prose? Because the formatting is wrong for all three of them. The writing may be interesting and dialogue interesting, but this looks like a very young child scribbled it all up for you as you dictated what you wanted to be put down.

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This sounds kind of interesting. It feels a bit poetic with the words you chose. It does make me want to read the book, which is the purpose.

Thank you looking forward to reading the whole book.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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