The beginning of a never ending love story

I was playing this super awesome game Called LOVELYxCATION.I was really interested in that game,I love it so much that ideas 

overflowed in my mind,I chose the one that is not close to the story of the game.It was thanks to that game that I could

finally make a non-fiction love story that I can finish.Of course all the credits go to Hibiki Works who made that game.

Chapter 1:The beginning of a never ending love story

My name is Kurokawa,Nanase* I am from a country side of the near Kinokawa City and now I am going to Tokyo to study in a pretty normal school, The name of the school is Suisei High School.Suisei High School has wide variation of clubs and the Mansion apartment I am staying in is just 5-10 minutes walk away from the school so its easy not to get late.Actually I wanted to stay in the village I lived in but my uncle forced me to go here because I am the only teenager in the village,he wanted me to have a nice long love relationship with a pretty girl.I know that it will never happen because I haven't even talked to a girl who is a teenager.

I was pretty tired because of the super long trip but I need to carry all my things to my room because I was late and the movers just left my stuff in front of my apartment door.As I was having a hard time carrying my things into my apartment,a middle aged man approached me and said,

"Young man,do you need help?" he then carried a box to my room,

"My things are a bit heavy,please don't mind me, please worry about your own health" I immediately tried to stop him because I was worried that I might cause him trouble.

"Don't worry,don't worry its common for a neighbor to help each other so don't worry about me" The man insisted on helping so I let him help me.

We finally carried my stuff in my room,I said thanks to the man who helped me,

"My name Kurosaki Genjirou*,I live in room 205.If you need help,just call me and I will help.Oh,here, a map of this city" Kurosaki-san* gave me a map of the city he then walked towards his room and bowed my head in gratitude from helping me.

I entered my room and closed the door.It was a busy day for me so I just went straight to my bed and took an afternoon nap.

I never expected that that day was the day my life started to change in a good way.A never ending love story

Reviews

[Nariko]

This seems like an interesting beginning. I like how you introduced the character in first person. It's short and simple. I like it. I am going to read all of the chapters.