Red Light.

Red Light.

A Poem by Casey Nicolee
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about me..

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OFFICIALLY RED. INFORMALLY BLUE. S**T. YOU DON'T LIKE THE ROAD YOUR FLOORING THE GAS DOWN? WELL, WHAT BRINGS YOU TO THIS TOWN HE SAYS, LOOKING DOWN ASHAMED OF WHERE YOU'VE BEEN AND WHAT YOU'VE DONE, FLOOR THE GAS.
YOUR OFFICIALLY RED.
OFFICIALLY SCREWED.
THERE AIN'T NO GOING BACK, YOU'VE RUN THAT RED LIGHT, YOU'VE SET THAT RECORD IN YOUR HEAD, YOU'VE NEVER DONE ANYTHING BAD. YOU GOT THIS YOU SAY TO YOURSELF.
GOT WHAT? WHAT DO YOU GOT THAT SHE DON'T HAVE?
YOUR OFFICIALLY RED.
INFORMALLY BLUE.
SO WHAT BRINGS YOU TO THIS TOWN HE SAYS.

© 2014 Casey Nicolee


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huh.... Interesting... The flow was cool... and the CAPS gave it something.... It definitely added to the emotion here... not sure what to call it... But anywho, it was AWESOME Casey. :) I liked it.

Nitpicks:
Punctuation... some rough patches that could be solved by adding punctuation or spacing.

Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 11, 2014
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