Winding Paths

Ever feel lost? Don't know where you're going?

Questions, confusion, drifting.

The mind continues to wander about without a purposeful direction.

Wondering to ones self..."What is it I'm supposed to be doing?

Where is it I'm supposed to be heading?"

Pondering over these thoughts,

One continuously gets lost on the winding paths that lead to no definite direction.

Standing confused and slightly alone, the world continues spinning.

There are things that must be done that seem overwhelming,

But when viewing the alternative route...

Life seems to wash away down the drain into the dark depths of despair.

Reviews

[Petal]

This is a very powerful poem =D. It has very strong emotions that really make you think of life and destination.
One tiny critique of mine is in the third line it says "one's" when it should be "ones".
But all in all a really outstanding piece of work.

[selkietales]

So true! You captured this really well!

[Biju]

true