Confetti hearts

She acts like she's grounded in something
But lately she's liquid
Takes the shape of whatever container
She pours herself into
It's sad
Sometimes she's vapor
Seeps into a room
Nowhere to be seen but you can sense her all around
Taste her soul on the tip of your tongue
Faint scent of perfume and rage
Rotting love
Then there's days she's all you see
The thing you can't tear you eyes away from
Bursting into rooms likes flames
Burning like exploding Suns
Blinding
Skin like milk
Soft, sweet
Cold
He likes to tell her dirty things
Watch her bite her lip
She throws ropes like coiled snakes around his neck
Pulling him in
His world spinning between her thighs
He's lost himself inside her so many nights
She still doesn't know if he likes her
She'll never ask
She just blows smoke above her head to look like halos
So you believe in magic
She wears her lipstick dark and her jackets leather
Impenetrable on the outside
Shards of broken flowers tossed like cheap confetti inside
An open book
Just questions, no answers
Ellipsis where giving an answer is too hard
And pictures: smudged, purple
Everything is out of focus
Swirls of colours she has spoken
To every one who ever broke her
It doesn't matter
Her eyes deceitfully glaring onwards
She's looking backwards
Into her herself,
Into her mind - her glamorous hell
Her shoulders bleeding in pelting rain
She doesn't feel it
She thinks she's dancing in meadows where flowers are never broken
Blowing kisses to rows of souls that she forgot once broke her
Everyone is an angel
Nobody is broken

Reviews

[Mayank]

I really enjoyed the structure here,
"Takes the shape of whatever container
She pours herself into
It's sad
Sometimes she's vapor
Seeps into a room
Nowhere to be seen but you can sense her all around
Taste her soul on the tip of your tongue
Faint scent of perfume and rage
Rotting love "

this has to be best lines here... I could feel someone that way when I read those.

[MinorArt]

Thank you for your words - they always make me smile

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I really enjoyed this. I love how you incorporated the different senses of her. Beautiful. Nice job!

[MinorArt]

I really appreciate you saying that, thank you x

[Inject Positivity]

Magnificent!!

I think you did a fantastic job while painting the description of her... The whole poem has a nice flow with lots of thoughts and profound use of words... I loved the details you put about her, it's lovely write... Well done... The ending two line bears a message...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[MinorArt]

Thank you so much got taking the time to say that - it really made my day!

[Inject Positivity]

I'm more than happy that my simple words made your day my frnd... God bless you...