Hypotheticals

Hypotheticals

A Poem by MinorArt
"

Coulda shoulda woulda

"
I could've walked down golden crunchy leaves
amongst trees
With lights
flickering like fairies in the dark
I could've told the world how happy you made me
Had you taken the time to make me happy
I could've said I do
If you'd just asked
I could've loved you better than them all
If I ever loved you at all

© 2016 MinorArt


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I guess reservation can sometimes work in opposing ways
Saying could have and would have
amounts to regret
And life was not made for one to live that way

so we try to open up ..... living with no regrets .......

I enjoyed reading this piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


MinorArt

8 Years Ago

I'm glad it spoke to you, really. And thank you for your words
Ouch! The ending is crushing, but good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


MinorArt

8 Years Ago

I'm happy it made an impact, thank you!

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Added on May 16, 2016
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MinorArt
MinorArt

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A Poem by MinorArt