Bogota

A garage filled with lawn mower
Exhaust fumes, reminds
Of a time in Columbia
Waiting for a crazy colored city bus,
Smelling your perfume over
The industry, knowing
Even in the clutch of suburbia,
I will never forget your
20 year old skin.

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

near perfect far as i can figure it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a juxtaposition this is...the scent of the beauty's youth mixed with that suburban smog of buses and trains and construction...
Love the title...and the setting.
j.

[Amberlight]

Ah, 20 year old skin - something about that I love. This could be the setting for a screen play.