Soft skin. Hard Alcohol.

Soft skin. Hard Alcohol.

A Poem by Cory Barrett

Husky green leaves clutch to limbs that bore them,

                but many of the splashy reds, and yellows have jumped.


3 snows visited here already;

the kind of that melt faster, than they fall.


My liquor collection grows robust during falling days,

                and blank-stared thoughts are more prevalent;

                symptomatic of former-love disease.


Frost has no business to remind me of warmth;

                that responsibility has been delegated to good scotch.

© 2018 Cory Barrett


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Many a misery sought solace in a glass of Scotch.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great ! A mix of fine imagery and personal emotion, a touch of wry humour..Really good poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nothing like a hot toddy to keep the chills away in winter when the days are short and the nights are long. I don't like drinking it neat though, but maybe with ginger ale. I very much enjoyed your description in your first two stanzas which set the scene. All the best and keep warm.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good scotch make Winter less painful. Thank you Cory for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cory Barrett

5 Years Ago

Anytime... but now its time for a drink
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Sometime a drink. Make us slow down and see better. Worst sometimes too.
I'm not much of drinker when it comes to the hard stuff but I've heard that a good scotch can warm the soul and provide just enough of a numb feeling that it can always feel as though a heart is healing. I may have to start drinking more!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cory Barrett

5 Years Ago

I layed off drinks for a a while.... my writing suffered! Stay Warm!
plain language and bold type...well suite the solution to that cold ;) i especially enjoy the exhuberance of your jumping reds and yellows ... ?syntax in this line "the kind of that melt faster, than they fall." do you mean to leave out the "of" ? ... i see your speaker in his book cases filled wall to wall, worn brown leather chair studio ... a place of reprieve ..solitude with that great tasting Scotch ... mmmm kind gonna have to pick up a bottle .. its been a while ;)
E.



Posted 6 Years Ago


Cory Barrett

5 Years Ago

A syntax most certainly. i wish i had a a studio for solitude and reprieve... maybe i could make a .. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

nothing wrong with closet man caves ;)))))))))))))))
i don't really like scotch...but think i might join you in a toast.
I really like where this one ended up---
Hit the road, Frost...
and part of me thinks of the other Frost...the poet and "stopping by the woods on a snowy evening"---
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cory Barrett

5 Years Ago

Man that frost sure could make a happy poem in disguse... wonder if he like scotch

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