Strawberry Avalanche

The feeling that I get, burst's inside me like biting into a juicy strawberry. 

Most of the times even the  Red, Plump and fresh strawberries need to be Tipped off with a bit of sugar or chocolate. 

But, if you could enjoy them simply as they are, then you have truly found the perfect strawberry. 

The feeling I get jumping into a pool on a very hot day. 

That wonderful refreshing feeling of breaking the water. 

Like needles going into you as you hit the cold water. 

The feeling I get is like wanting to sleep forever in that perfect dream.

As purple and blue mountains burst out from behind the clouds and mystical sparkly blue rivers.

Where you find yourself laughing at the simple things in life. 

All beneath the candy coded clouds, is like a wonderful storm of strawberries and sweet stars. 
This world of star's exploding around me into fireworks and glittering lights, glistening in the light as they crash over me. 

This is the feeling of a strawberry avalanche. The feeling I got when I talked to him. 

Author's Note

Kinda wanted something sweet to be my first post on this account.

Reviews

[JordanIsaacSmith]

Well, the first paragraph made me hungry. I loved the description in this. It was short, but sweet, in more ways than one. Interestingly, I didn't find that the coloured words distracted me at all and, in fact, enhanced the meaning of the words and writing a little. A short and enjoyable read!

[Ben]

The use of colors was nice. The ending was unexpected, but really great. I was expecting the poem to continue with what you had going before, but then you changed it around and linked it all together. Very cool.