For More

Breathing

Gasping

Choking "For more"--

What I didn't ask for.

"It's not so bad"-- you say to me.

As I'm Hoping

Hoping

"It's only what you need."

--Never listen

Listen

To my pleads,

Down in my very core--

What I didn't ask for.

It Hurts

So much!

I can hardly see.

It's pounding inside me-- too hard to Breathe.

Breathe?

Breathe.

And then once more,

What I didn't ask for.

It pounds like hurt--

So much inside.

Again

Again.

Maybe once more?

What I didn't ask for.

Breathing

Gasping

Choking "For more"--

What I didn't ask for.

Author's Note

First poem in a long time-- hope it's okay. ^^
I'd like your opinion!
If you stop to read it-- surely you've got enough time to leave a review?

Reviews

[luna11]

This is so sad!
But I love it. :D
Well written.
xx

[_]

:'I *sniff* i think its sad. hold on need a tissue.
*leaves for a tissue. blows out nose and bougars. makes a mess*
oh god! oh god! made a mess!
yeah i'll have to wrap this up, this was small but potent, very sad! love it! :)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love this poem you put a lot into it and it really showed...it was kinda sad but that made me want to keep reading it...