Ba-Thump Bump Little Heart

Ba-Thump Bump Little Heart

A Poem by StoryTailor

Ba-thump
Bump

Ba-thump
Bump

Hello, little heart
So fragile and soft
It's been a while since we've talked
A lot's happened in that while too
I thought it'd be a good time
For me to speak to you

Ba-thump
Bump

Ba-thump
Bump

Yes little heart,
I know I should have listened
And because I was stubborn, 
My eyes refuse to glisten
Oh, little heart
I wish I could remember the day,
The day that I'd lost my way

Ba-Thump
Bump

Little heart,
I'm sorry, I should have stayed on track
But I fear I've gotten us lost,
I don't know the way back

Bump
Ba-thump

Oh, but little heart
So feeble
Yet so strong
They left long ago,
Don't you remember,
That's what made us like so

Bump

Yes, little heart
I understand
I know how it feels,
to have someone drop your cold hand
I was there, little heart,
When they walked away.
How I wish I could remember that day.

Thump.

Don't worry, little heart
I cannot go
I would never even wish it so
For you, little heart,
I know now
Are the only one 
The only one that could possibly understand how

Ba-thump
Bump

Ba-thump
Bump

Hello, little heart
So fragile and soft
It's been a while since we've talked
A lot's happened in that while too
I thought it'd be a good time
For me to speak to you

© 2010 StoryTailor


Author's Note

StoryTailor
Ba-Thump to you too,
And now I'm left wondering,
How could you?
You left me alone, out in the dark...
How could you? How dare you?
My feeble little heart?

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this is a really good poem. It's really sad, but good. Well all your writing is good. Well when I read this I felt lonely and scared. Hmm... This part was the one that hit my heart the most;

"Yes, little heart
I understand
I know how it feels,
to have someone drop your cold hand
I was there, little heart,
When they walked away.
How I wish I could remember that day.


Thump.


Don't worry, little heart
I cannot go
I would never even wish it so
For you, little heart,
I know now
Are the only one
The only one that could possibly understand how"

Wow.. I can't relate fully, but I understand how it feels to be alone to be lost, and for your heart to be the only one to understand what exactly you're going through and why you feel the way you do. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmmm..it's innocent and cute in one way and morose in another. But I liked reading it..simple words that get you into something are hard to put together..and your poem does that very well.
Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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