No Existence.

 I don't exist, no not at all. And what I do, means nothing at all.

You walk right by, pretend to see.

But I know the reality.

 

I don't exist, no not at all. And what I do, means nothing at all.

Just yesterday, it started to rain.

I stood out there, still, you couldn't see my pain.

 

I don't exist, no not at all. And what I do, means nothing at all.

The day before, I walked away, and as I did I started to fall.

But nobody could see me, not one. And I wasn't going to stop their fun.

 

I don't exist, no not at all. And what I do, means nothing at all.

As I stand here, you walk away. And I do nothing to hide the pain.

But you still don't see, what you mean to me.

 

I don't exist, no not at all. And what I do, means nothing at all.

You left me here to ponder, and now my pondering is done.

Still, I've got my question, how does something that's not there, find a way to hurt?

 

I don't exist, no not at all. And what I do, means nothing at all.

If I'm not here, and I can't see.

If I don't feel, and I don't breathe.

 

If I don't exist, not at all. How do I keep the ability to fall?

 

If I don't exist, not at all. How do I retain all this pain?

 

If I don't exist, not at all. How come I can still cry?

 

I don't exist, no not at all. Ad what I do, means nothing at all.

Author's Note

*teardrop*

Reviews

[Requs]

awh oki, well it seems like you expressed yourself beautifully. (in the last line correct the "ad" to "and"). I can definitely relate with the negligence of people, ignorance, and blind sight. They really do take advantage of what they have, not realizing they taunt what they fear. And they fear you because the loneliness you seem to acquire, that is something people have trouble comprehending. As a critique of writing, I like it because it its very comprehensive, my only nit pick is that the lines that flow together with "rain" and "pain" feel minorly cliche' for a match I'd suggest a connecting line in between or an expression to represent the word like," and you couldn't see(or "comprehend") how I could keep( or"still be") sane" may work better. just as a suggestion. -mATT

[apocalypse]

The last four lines, again, the best.
Good write..it's hard to get your message through using simple words sometimes..and this does just that, loved it.

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Wow, I feel like this sometimes. you did a nice job expressing real, raw emotion. i haven't written a poem like this in a while. you might just inspire me to keep going :)
I really liked it; all of your poems are fantastic.
:D

[ebur™]

that was an awesome poem. awesome as in the ability to make me feel the emotion that surrounded it. sorrow, pain, a bit of betrayal. It was great. I can relate to this poem really well, and thank you for creating this poem to share. well done. :)

[*Evelen*]

(Sniffles, but wipes your teardrop off your face) It's okay. You do to exist. This was a very beautiful and sad poem. (Wipes tears from own face) Well done!