The Novel

well it's not really a novel, as you can see :)

You read me like a book

Touching my pages with your fingertips

Your eyes move over each line of my body

Reading my story, absorbed in me

 

You cradle me in your hands

Open and exposed to your devouring eyes

Sharing my inner most thoughts

You make my story come alive

 

You read each chapter avidly

Every word on every page

Editing the troubled grammar

Repairing the wronged phrases

 

My story is not yet complete

You are filling in my blank pages

My story is Our Story

Infinitely added to through the ages

Author's Note

It's a confirmation of the way, that special someone can be so in tune to the one they love. Like Al is with me :)

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a wonderful " Love Story"...awww, you knew somebody was going there...lol...great job on this...now I can say I know who wrote the book on love...it was my friend Melanie!

[Albert Freeman]

That was amazing:) I feel the same way. One book to another. I enjoy reading your pages as each one draws me more and more into your story so that it becomes our story. xxxx

[D. Nelson]

i love it. Very simple but well worded. Its wonderful when we find that special someone who seems to complete our lives. We have to cherish the sometimes fleeting amount of time that we can be given with them. you really expressed the deep feeling of this, great work. You need to add writing more often! lol

[Angel's Lady]

You read me like a book
Touching my pages with your fingertips
Your eyes move over each line of my body
Reading my story, absorbed in me --- Oh man, this is perfect!

You cradle me in your hands
Open and exposed to your devouring eyes -- Talk about vulnerable, I can FEEL THIS.

Great write, Mel! Wow. I have felt "painted" before but I have never felt "read" until now...wow. You have given me a whole new perspective! And it seems so simple...

Wonderfully written...Good job!