Sister's Mine

I have 6 sisters. This is for all of them.... with love. Adele, Filomena, Louisa, Aurora, Valerie, AnnaPaula...

 

Sister's Mine,

When you weep, I feel tears trace down my cheeks

When you scream, I absorb your pain

When you are afraid, I fear for you

When you've reached your limits

I will carry the load ..

 

Sister's Mine,

your strength is stronger than you know

Your courage ...is courageous

Your humour ... makes me giggle

Your boundless love all encompassing

 

Sister's Mine,

You don't know how precious you are

How much I admire, love and respect you

I am here for you, as you've been there for me

 

Sister's Mine,

I smile fondly when I remember

Times you've made me laugh till I cried

When we cried till we laughed

When all we could do was hold each other

I will always hold you in my heart...

 

Reviews

[Keith]

Beautiful poem,!

[Jessica Benfield]

im speechless - the love and care behind each word is breathtaking. in reading this, it reminds you of every soul in your life - whether it be a sister, or a girlfriend - and how much you deeply adore them. this is amazing!
smiles,
jess

[Michael X]

beautiful, loving and endearing melanie, this is beautiful and captures
what love you hold unconditionally for those you hold close to your heart,
the bond that cannot be broken, one can feel your heart in every word,

[D. Nelson]

this is a really great piece Melanie. you really expressed how strong the bond between siblings can be. great work. =]

[Tony Hwilka]

Very nicely written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe so very beautiful and heartfelt... those bonds of siblings can be so strong and special that even hen you are at odds there is nothing you won't do for one another... very beautifully done.

[Albert Freeman]

Beautiful writing, Stormz! Very emotional and raw honesty filled with a strong bond.

[~angelalala~]

this is a beautiful, emotional piece. i love it. makes me wish i had a sister. well done.

[Spoken]

wow, such a beautiful thing to have this strong sisterhood that you can always rely and count on. You are truly lucky to have so many amazing sisters and they lucky to have you...
great write!