I Miss You....

just letting it out..

My heart misses you

It aches in pain

As if covered in a shroud

Days stretch by with me alone

Till that day you come on home

 

Each day's struggle to find peace and slumber

Without your body's warmth and wonder

I Love You now, I Love You Still

I Love You Babe, I Always Will

 

I hear your voice occasionally

It makes me smile so happily

To know that you are in my heart

It helps me overcome, the time apart

 

I need your voice, your warm embrace

I need to look into your smiling face

I need to nuzzle your neck and chest

To lick your skin and taste your scent

 

My loneliness knows no bounds

Simply cos your not around

My empty bed is no sanctuary

Without you there to set me free

 

I'm exhausted with the distance bourne

My shoulders heavy, heart forlorn

Every minute spent on the phone

Makes me feel less alone

 

Come home soon baby, I Miss You

I Love You Now, I Love You Still

I Love You Now, I Always Will...

Author's Note

Just expressing what I need to ....

Reviews

[Helena]

Loneliness with every line. Very well written and the longing for your
loved one showed so poignantly with every word.

Thank you for submitting this to my "loneliness" contest.

~ Helena ~

[Imperfection]

No matter how long the hours seem now, when he comes home, you won't be able to recall this period of loneliness...

Beautifully expressed.

[Christine]

I empathize with you you. Your heartache is palpable. I hope it helped ease some of your pain by releasing the it through this poem. Great write...sad... but great.
~Christine :-)

[universalove]

tis is beauitful. dream do come true

[Spoken]

your rhyme scheme is flawless. It can be tough to rhyme so well and still find meaningful deep words.. all of which you've accomplished seemingly effortlessly. Your expression is well felt.

[Dani California]

"Love You Now, I Love You Still
I Love You Now, I Always Will..."


Awwww!!!

I can't take too much more of the romantic poems
today, my heart is taking a beating, I tell ya... and
this one almost did me in.

Beautiful! So beautiful to love like this, Melanie..
although you may feel lonely being apart, feel blessed
that you love and are loved. Truly... the distance will
eventually close, but the heart remains open and filled..
and that's a blessing indeed.. !

Lovely!!

[MonA]

the best thing you expressed in this poem what you are really missing it's not just him it's the things you used to do with him and the way you felt about it ..great job i really felt it cause i know how it feels to miss someone..

[lauren emily]

Sometimes poetry is the best way to just let all your feelings pour out. The emotion that you feel is clearly expressed and this flows really nicely.
Keep up the great work,
~Lauren

[Tony Hwilka]

A great and honest way to make your feeling known. It just runs over with love.

[Susan]

I can hear and feel your heartache. the poem expresses your feelings very well.
I hope that whoever it is aimed for, receives it soon..