Time Whispers

Fallen slowly, eyes that see me
See my truth and love me still
Wings unfolding, close around me
Keep me warm and comforted too

Take my breath, send me more
Will my heart to beat as strong
Singe my soul with your desire
A fire burns inside of you

The morning sun seduces me
Touch my cheek like a caress
Wind enfold me, whisper gently
Bring us to that simple place

Song beat sounding thru my mind
In my soul I hear no words
but those of your lips murmur
No sweeter sound on earth.
 

Author's Note

Just curious what it says to you...

Reviews

[Jessica Benfield]

wow this is so amazing... it made me imagine the love between a person, and an angel - perhaps he angel i am imagining is time itself - as in the title. maybe it was a person in time -

"Wings unfolding, close around me"

time unfolding around this person. beautiful... absolutely beautiful...
smiles,
jess

[Dani California]

I didn't remove this from my reading library after
I reviewed it last time, so here I am again..
I really like this.

So full of admiration and love...

"Song beat sounding thru my mind
In my soul I hear no words
but those of your lips murmur
No sweeter sound on earth..."


Truly wonderful work my friend.

[Angel's Lady]

Singe my soul with your desire - Wow. What a beautiful line. I wish I'd written it!

The morning sun seduces me
Touch my cheek like a caress -- You write so eloquently! Such wonderful imagery. I can almost feel this touch, as it softly grazes my cheek. Ahhhh....

Very wonderful write. Nicely done!

[Dani California]

Awww.... I love this. Quite beautiful Melanie..

To me it speaks of love.... but I tend to seek that out ..lol.

Timeless, universal, nature... spiritual oneness that embraces
us all...loves us regardless..... :)

I did feel the definite presence of an angel of sorts, which could
be the oneness -- as I don't view angels as single souls/figures

.... outstanding poem!

[closed account]

ok, I am going to go by my gut,, I know if I read it again I am going to change my view, so hear it goes
it sounds as if you are longing for someone that you don't have, you sleep thinking of them, another morning sun and your mind is where it was the night before,, lol,, I am pretty sure that I am far from what you had in mind.. but thats what I got!!!

[Murphy]

What does is it say to me? It says that dreams will only grow as big you allow them to... same goes for love. Ok, so what it really says?... it says.. ALBERT, you soul singer... you six alarm blaze! Near the end of this, I began hearing the words to that country music song, "I'm gonna make your world better than it's eeeever been.... and I'll earn your trust making memories of us". This is great... cheering you both on in a big way... I'm going to send you both a read request for a haiku that I came across the other day (written by someone else). Makes me think of you. Thanks for sharing this... you have a wonderful story!

[Susan]

A beautiful poem...it speaks to the soul.

[Bear]

awe, this is an awesome write!! I am so grateful to the friends that have stayed in my life for so many decades... they've seen my truths and love me still. Oh, I could go on and on about the thoughts this poem stirs up within... but, I'll save you the time reading my thoughts. Just know, I love this poem!! Thanks for sharing your gift!!
Sallie Bear

[Samuel Dickens]

Well, I'm not very good at finding hidden meanings or interpreting this kind of verse. (Probably explains the simple way I write) It just sounds like someone in love who is erupting with passion. It's beautiful. Sam

[Albert Freeman]

Wow. Ok now this was definitely speaking to me in a vibrant language that dances through my soul. I absolutely love it. Your song sounds through my soul. :) xxxx