Sweetness

Sweetness

A Poem by Nely Amorim
"

something short

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Sweetness is the hand that I hold

when walking on the beach

Sweetness is the laughter I hear

when secrets are shared

Sweetness is the eyes

that shine with love for me

Sweetness is your arms around me.... 

© 2008 Nely Amorim


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Very beautifully written! I like your style a lot! And I definitely enjoying reading you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I enjoyed this...was initially drawn to it by your title, which is what I call my sweetheart...My Sweetness. You captured exactly why I call her that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful poem baby, now tell Kodi to get his paws off of you! Love your poetry as always. xxx

Posted 16 Years Ago


=) Aww..what a lovely little poem..precious..endearing words of love=) Beautiful write=)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Nely Amorim
Nely Amorim

Fremantle, West Australia, Australia



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I have enjoyed reading all types of novels since as far as I can remember, a love of reading encouraged by my Mother, even at expense to her own interests. Stormzz I have neglected this site fo.. more..

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