Secret Treasure

Secret Treasure

A Poem by Nely Amorim
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A poem intended for it's hidden meaning.....

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Rain like a mist, obscuring the world

Slowly soaking my coat and hair

As I gaze out at the horizon

And the wonders I see there

 

Dark and broody clouds a warning

Of harder rains to come and yet

The sun holds strong thru the misty rain

Pushing through the dark curtains

 

Illuminates my secret Treasure

A wondrous sight to see

The suns rays striking on the glass

Of ocean’s face, perfect in it’s Grace

 

Secret Treasure you are found

As the misty rain wets my face

I smile with happiness

As I witness this miraculous bliss

 

Like a window in the world

You break through with a whisper

You see, my darling love

You are, no longer, my “secret” Treasure

© 2008 Nely Amorim


Author's Note

Nely Amorim
the photo was taken today :)

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Wonderful photo and beautiful poetry. What a combination!

As the misty rain wets my face
I smile with happiness
As I witness this miraculous bliss

Truly beautiful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


What a wonderful poem, Melanie! A kindred spirit, you are, too, with your keen sense of beauty and love. You are most skillful. Sam

Posted 16 Years Ago


Niiiiice. Love your skills at photography and wish I was there to share it with you. Love the poetry behind the picture as well. You always inspire me to write more and to reach for the stars. xxx

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Nely Amorim
Nely Amorim

Fremantle, West Australia, Australia



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