Kodi

Kodi

A Poem by Nely Amorim
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just a fun Ode to my dog..lol he's a trip, JR Terrier on speed, I swear he's never still for long..lol

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Kodi

 

You’re a cheeky little sod!

You get your way too much

But who can resist your sweet face?

And all your winning ways?

 

Some days you are my closest friend

Some days you cuddle close

Some days you like to drive me nuts

When you bark & chase the cats…

 

You are my four legged furry friend

Without you, I’d be lost

I’ll always keep you safe with me

No matter what the cost

 

You make me laugh, so very much

You chase me through the house

Sliding across the kitchen tile

As if you glide on ice

 

Every expressive look you give

Tells me you are so much more

Than just a simple Jack Russell Dog

Who almost always walks on fours.

© 2008 Nely Amorim


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Melanie, this is funny and delightful, expressional poem regarding your jack russle, he sounds like a feisty lil guy, i like the analogy of skidding across the tile floor as if it were ice, slick as a skating ring, and in ways your poem shows how

fun and cartoonish pets can be, and how the lil things in life can create happiness, and simple joys, i like how you expressed your dog's personality, in a way that
gives him, just like a rambunctious, playful character, you pay an honoring paying

trubute to Kodi, your four legged lil friend, great job, humorous and well written
Take Care, Mike

Favorite Stanza:

Some days you are my closest friend

Some days you cuddle close

Some days you like to drive me nuts

When you bark & chase the cats…




Posted 16 Years Ago


Another great poem, Melanie! You capture those sentiments that many of us must have about our pets. I've got a half chihuahua--half rat terrier that either sleeps nicely on my lap or tries to chew the shoes off my feet. Sam

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this poem. You captured the Kodster perfectly. Love the interplay between the two of you. My favorite person and animal in the world. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very descriptive any dog lover will be able to picture this scamp. Couched in poetc prose an enjoyable read

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nely Amorim
Nely Amorim

Fremantle, West Australia, Australia



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