Midnight Dreams

just a sleeping thought of mine :)

Mid-Night Dreams

A sleeping ocean a silver trail
dark & deep, a silent veil
reflecting the moons path
across the starlit bath

Cool pristine grains of sand
pressing between our toes
as we walk slowly hand in hand
A soft breeze caresses me

I realise suddenly its you
whisper soft against my cheek
I turn to you with a soft sigh
Your lips touch mine unique

My arms steal up across your chest
and over your shoulders
To cling tightly with desire
As I taste you on my tongue

Your arms pull me to you
Hold me tightly in your clasp
The world is held at bay
As I cling to you fast

Waves lapping at the shore reach us
Warm, encompassing, yet sublime
Laughing softly we move on
Across the sands of time

Our footsteps mark the way we've come
Smooth shoreline up ahead
The future can be what we wish
If careful how we tread...

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I like it. I could see the quicksilver image you conjour up and I surrendered to the theme and imagry of the dream, which is positve and pleasant. 'I realise suddenly it's you' is a key line for me as it just sounds like an exciting moment. I also like the last two lines, though they sound like you thinking, post-dream. The rhyme works well and the poem is sustained and well executed. I think it works because of the strong opening which delivers the reader to the touching moments that follow. I like it.

[Jane Doe]

What beautiful writing and imagery! This is a wonderful piece, thanks for sharing.

[vanishing]

I love the way you captured this poetry
in moonlight perspective!
It's absolutely Inspired
and this inspires the reader to
ponder the heart of the meaning with passion!
Dreamy-exceptional design, your words
flow straight from the heart
Embracing Romance expressed at height
Thank you

[Bear]

this caught my attention again tonight; so I read it again as if I hadn't before. If only there were "one" in my life tonight with which I could share such a walk along the shore line, with the moonbeams shining from above, etc. etc. etc. ;~)

Dreams... this one is a lovely and good dream and I thank you again for sharing it.
Sallie Bear

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Simply beautiful. Your descriptions are sexy and sensual.

[Bear]

if careful how we tread... gee ain't that the truth of it ALL?
A fine poem!! Good write. Thanks for sharing it with the gray haired, aging fool. ;~)

Bear

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Fantabulous! Beautifully expressed! Shelly

[shadadakiya]

that's really pretty you make writting look so easy so lovely

[Albert Freeman]

Amazing poem, baby. You're making me envious at your skills. This is a painting with your words. Sensual and playful in terms, very beautiful. xxx

[Michael X]

mel, this is a beautifully invented vision of timelessness expressed as a loving sentiment of the heart,
dreamy in its ambience, passionate blissfulness, the images themselves are magical, the sense of
walking into the future creates a mindscape of emotions with colorfully added detail to the scenery,
one can see the ocean in your words and feel the misty breaks. the adoration aspect is engaging
sets the reader adrift, completely romantic in its sensually defining mystique, loved it, well done