Dreams....

A Poem written almost a year ago...

Dreams

Slowly slowly times goes by,
it's spring and yet winter won't say bye
Many things have changed yet stayed the same
A chance to sit and hear the rain

Thoughts of  you consume my mind
Words and actions, returned in kind
Pictures help prevent the fading
of moments taken and memory waning

Still I linger on the nights and days
spent in your company in so many ways
Smiling when I recall a time or place
that days and distance cannot erase

I hold to what may come to pass
when maybe fate will come my way
and give to me what I cherish now
The thought that you again one day I'll see.
 

Reviews

[Bear]

Have you been "in my mind" in the past? You've found the correct words and composed them with such flow that I truly feel as though you've been inside my mind and somehow translated my past experiences along-side your own. Does that make any sense? Perhaps it do, or perhaps it don't? ;~}

Thanks for sharing it... I enjoyed it very much!
Bear

[Dani California]

I love this Melanie...
Such longing for distant love,
hanging onto memories...
creating new ones in the mind,
dreaming of the day ...


"Thoughts of you consume my mind
Words and actions, returned in kind
Pictures help prevent the fading
of moments taken and memory waning..."


Penned beautifully..

[Michael X]

there is a desirous sense of wanting and one can feel the specific rhythm of thoughts,
reading this has a certain melody that carries each word, the feeling is dreamy, in a day
dream entrancing way of contemplation, i love how you describe the importance of
memories, and their ability to create sacred places in heart, one can feel the sense of
love lost, as I'm sure most people can relate in one way or another, beautiful, well written.

[Albert Freeman]

Love this poem, baby. A dream that will become a reality again :)