Mel

A poem describing my relationship with my girlfriend of six months, filled with sexual inuendos that could have several meanings.

A forbidden love, so taboo and sweet.

You offer me your mind, body and soul..

All mine to eat.

Society denies that it's real; but we make each other whole.

 

A secret all ours; only for us.

Sex with you is a pleasure.

I ignore others' complaints and their fuss.

I indulge in tasting her treasure.

 

Males that question why turn to the other side.

I'm not a lesbian.

I'm only bisexual I tell them with pride.

I'm only exploring the person I hold within.

 

 

Author's Note

This just came to me out of the blue. Any critique is welcome.! :) (*the girls in the picture are not us.!*)

Reviews

[Stormii]

- Btw ppl, we have now been together a year and 4 months.! :)

[Shane Blackheart]

I like this :) We should never hide who we are, and as I am a bisexual woman myself, I know how great it feels to be able to be open.

[Stormii]

- Thanks hun.! :)

[Jester]

Wonderful. I love the emotion, feeling and the part about pride. Good write!

[Stormii]

- Glad you like it.! :)

[Harmonica winds]

So very nicely written and creative. I like this

[Stormii]

- Much appreciated.! (:

[Courtney]

Love it

[Stormii]

- Thanks.! :)

[Courtney]

welcome

[pianoman]

Nice! Short, concise, to the point... Says what it needs to say with no superfluous filler. AND you managed to rhyme "lesbian!" No easy feat! I enjoyed it. Not the biggest fan of rhyme, but it doesn't bother me so much in this piece. Good job.