a poem that many people will be able to relate to.
No one knows what it's like to be hurt sometimes
A lot of people don't know what it's truly like to get hurt because they have never been hurt
No one knows what it's like to be called ugly, stupid, un- wanted, emo, b***h, fat, a nerd, a freak, anorexic, worthless, fake, twat, gay, alone, goth, and idiot
People have been called these things and people have called other people these things
It hurts you I know because I have been called some of these names
Here is a little secret, don't listen to those people that call you those things, just block it out like you never herd them say or call you those names
You are beautiful inside and out no matter what, so it shouldn't matter if you are called those things
No one knows what it's like to be hurt sometimes unless they know what it feels like to be hurt
I like it. A very heart felt poem. Your quote makes the poem confusing in part because you write that everyone will be able to relate, but the poem keeps saying, "No one knows, no one knows etc..." .....It's tough to figure out how to NOT react to others around you because it's good practice to not be anti-social. Being bullied doesn't even START what I went through. lol When I said my growing up was unique, that is exactly what it was on most things.... It would be a nice outlet for younger people to do what YOU are doing by way of writing and finding comfort in believing that their word is a precious one to be heard. I wouldn't have understood such words, but it would helped to not have me cutting myself open to slide metal under the skin for pain, be abused by girls my age in the worst of ways, start fires to burn everything in my life, and being blamed outright for my parent's divorce. That would be the tip of that proverbial iceberg!! lol The trouble in school starts at home. I was made to speak as an altar boy, attend church picnics, volunteer at soup kitchens etc.... so I wasn't neglected like most I know!! Great poem to link to on any site you belong to. : ) xoxo -Mark
I like it. A very heart felt poem. Your quote makes the poem confusing in part because you write that everyone will be able to relate, but the poem keeps saying, "No one knows, no one knows etc..." .....It's tough to figure out how to NOT react to others around you because it's good practice to not be anti-social. Being bullied doesn't even START what I went through. lol When I said my growing up was unique, that is exactly what it was on most things.... It would be a nice outlet for younger people to do what YOU are doing by way of writing and finding comfort in believing that their word is a precious one to be heard. I wouldn't have understood such words, but it would helped to not have me cutting myself open to slide metal under the skin for pain, be abused by girls my age in the worst of ways, start fires to burn everything in my life, and being blamed outright for my parent's divorce. That would be the tip of that proverbial iceberg!! lol The trouble in school starts at home. I was made to speak as an altar boy, attend church picnics, volunteer at soup kitchens etc.... so I wasn't neglected like most I know!! Great poem to link to on any site you belong to. : ) xoxo -Mark
Very simple but has a great message. I think you should reduce the second stanza to just be "A lot of people don't know truly what it's like to be hurt." I think its unnecessary to say "because they have never been hurt." I think that line is necessary in the poem but I think it should go somewhere else. Just my opinion though. Simply a personal preference. Great poem!
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A lot of people don't use common sense when they speak. I like your recommendation. Most people feel alone and distance sometimes. Just need real friends to keep them strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
"You are beautiful inside and out
no matter what, so it shouldn't
matter if you are called those
things
No one knows what it's like to
be hurt sometimes unless they
know what it feels like to be
hurt"
A very nice poem that is so relevant to our times and especially to bully people or hurtful ones who do not care about others and their feelings...Thank you for sharing...:)
This is very well written! This poem is encouraging to all who are struggling with bullying or abuse by not letting the abuser/bully bring them down. And that they matter 100%. Great poem!! :D 100/100
Very well written and spoken for sure =D
We shouldn't let words like those cut us like a knife . . .
We must remain strong and not take to heart what horrible things people may say about us . . .
We must not be concerned with what we cannot control
Just be yourself
Be strong =D
Some of my poems might not be that good but please don't say anything bad about my poems because i know some of my poems are not that good then my other poems.
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