Spirit in the Moon Light

its a toughing and sad poem in a way.

When you see darkness you
know the moon and stars
will shine

As the moon shines you know
that there is spirit in the moon
light

When spirit is in the moon light
you will know that there was a
lot of sorrow

When spirit and sorrow fills you,
there is no stopping is to let you
know that there was a lot of sorrow
in the past

There is spirit in the moon light

And as it passes through you, you
will never forget that spirit is in
the moon light

When spirit is in the moon light,
the wind will blow and you will
know that there is spirit in the
moon light

Spirit passes through and sorrow
is filled in the air

There is spirit in the moon light
along with sorrow in the air

You will never forget the memory
of what filled you with sorrow

Author's Note

This is just a poem I wrote for thoughs who lost a person or something happened to them. its in memory for the kids who get shot for no reason at all.

Reviews

[Celtic]

Lovely write. Your this line "spirit in the moon light" has seen in every stanza, that's a pretty good thing to reader...your this poem really flutters me a lot, here's mornin' yet, now i'm waitin' for night thereby i could see stars mooonlight or may be "spirit in the moonlight"...
what a lovely write...hope you'll soon continue it, i want to read more, to know about it more. As you've mentioned in authors note that it's about kids ..wow, i think it could be about youngers too...because it's a light, this poem contains inspirations indirectly if you think deeply about spirit of light.
i liked this poem i think this's an another ppoem, that's i've ever read out here.
lovely one, words're strongly expressed in every line, in each stanza...if i'd suggestions to give you then i want to say, ...continue it...you can write more about it, i'd like to read more if you do continue it in a meanhwhile.
nice ink..totally inspirational write.

[Stormie Sky]

thank you so much

[17thWhitePrince]

A touching piece of poetry

"When you see darkness you
know the moon and stars
will shine"

Well done !!! =D

[Stormie Sky]

thanks =D

[Nick.B]

A great poem indeed, very raw and dark...keep up the good work

[Stormie Sky]

thanks

[first second third]

this touched my heart and the way it flowed was beautiful. keep it up girl you are great.

[Stormie Sky]

thank you very much :)

[first second third]

none needed you are a very gifted writer.:)

[Stormie Sky]

thank you :)