Thunderstorm

this is just fun poem about a thunderstorm.

The lightning is bright
The thunder is loud

Flashes of bright lights
are here
The thunder is rolling
in

The lightning is like a
bunch of flash lights
flickering on and off

The thunder is like
drums to my ears

Thunderstorms are
neat to hear

The thunderstorm is
finally here

Author's Note

this i wrote during a thunderstorm.

Reviews

[NITHIN PURPLE]

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[Stormie Sky]

thanks

[NITHIN PURPLE]

welcome///

[17thWhitePrince]

"Thunderstorms are neat to hear"
Until a tornado forms
And until it knocks out the power lolz =P =/

[Stormie Sky]

lolz thats true =P =/

[AmongSavages]

There's a relatively good use of imagery, but your rhythm seems off

[Stormie Sky]

My poems don't usually rhythm. and thanks