The Final Cut.

The Final Cut.

A Poem by Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness

You Said I wouldn't do it.
But it will only take a bit.
So it all to be over,soon.
By the time i see the moon.
I will be gone with thoughts of you.
Well,thoughts of what you used to be.
And How much you meant to me.
But you've changed.
We all have.
But i will watch it no more.
My heart will no longer be sore.
As i bring the blade up.
I think of,When? Why and What.
But i think past that and give myself,that one final cut.

© 2010 Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness


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This is well done. :D I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well...........that's depresing lol.

Thought it flowed well, nicely written. These things do get a bit boring (You should see how many poems like this there are on this site) but it's a good piece and to anyone who likes this style, they'll enjoy it.

Nice piece :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness
Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness

Gainsville, FL



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