Colorful Caged Birds

First poem I wrote that wasn't a requirement to anything. Figured why not pick up a new hobby so I started here. Please let me know what u think so I can grow and blossom.

The Birds 

They all fly Caged

Disparpaged not against

Not blue, nor green, nor red

All fly in the same Cage

That boreal Cage

A cacaphony of Color

Faster they fly

Green, red, blue, green again

The Cage begins to bulge, bend, and break

The Birds they fly

The Colors explode

A rainbow mist

Broken, Busted, Freed

Nothing

One Bird

One Color

One Nothing

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

that last line 'one nothing' was just amazing. great write :D

[McBee, J.S.]

Thanks :)