Stolen Emotion

Stolen emotion 

That sets a spark 

And ends with an explosion

It leaves a mark

With the deepest reds

On my heart

From what you’ve said

And it starts 

When I’m with you

It hurts me 

But you have no clue

And you start to see

Why I’m so weird 

For you alone 

Have gotten yourself seared 

Into my bones

Reviews

[_rabbitofhabit (1word)]

I want to say sorry for taking SO LONG to review your work. I’m no professional in poetry, but here are my thoughts. I like the simplicity of it, as well as the short length; both these things make it approachable, even to people who know little of poetry. I like the rhyme scheme and the wording. Not just the formatting of the words, but the expressions used.

[Kim S.]

And you start to see
Why I’m so weird
For you alone
Have gotten yourself seared
Into my bones

Love this part, this is wonderful