I am the Moon

I am the moon

and you are the ocean.

 

I am the moon

for while I may leave you,

you know I will always be back.

 

You are the ocean

for you are beautiful and calm

and yet you can be destructive and angry.

 

I am the moon

for I seem bright and cheerful

but you always know there is a dark side just out of sight.

 

You are the ocean

for you hide many dark secrets

and yet only your beauty shows.

 

I am the moon

and you are the ocean.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Very clever use of the moon and ocean to compare with people. Excellent!

wow thats really good poem. i like how u compared it to ocean and moon becasue thats good comparison and believable. likehow the first and last stanza are same.