Perfect

This poem was not written by me.. but dedicated to me by the love of my life Jimmy! Who inspired some of my writing.. because they were about him!

What makes you so perfect
Is it that maybre you arent perfect at all
What makes you so perfect
Is it that you are the most perfect after all

What makes you so perfect
Is it the way your eyes gorgeously shine
What makes you so perfect
Is that you yourself are sweeter than wine

What makes you so perfect
Is it that your lips are so kissable soft
What makes you so perfect
Is it the way your love feels like I could fly off

What makes you so perfect
Is it that your touch is more than enough
What makes you so perfect
Is it that when I see you my heart erupts

What makes you so perfect
Is it what all the others cannot see
Maybe what makes you perfect
Is what you see in me.

Reviews

[Nely Amorim]

this is a lovely tribute of your partners love for you, i especially like the last 4 lines... how lucky are we that we have men in our lives that love us enough to express these feelings :D