You Hold the Key

 

To lie awake and ponder

I close my eyes and

Vision you with me

I fall to your charm

Your slightest touch

The hottest kiss

The warmth of your hugs

That sparkle in your eye

The words you utter

Leave me speechless

Slowly you draw me in

Memorized by the power

You have over me

Driven by your every move

My mind wonders

In the very thought

Of sharing myself with you

So Here I am

To Bare to you

My heart, my soul, my body

It's yours to command,

You hold the key

So unlock the love

You've given to me.

Reviews

[Nely Amorim]

thats exactly how i feel about Albert Freeman.. the love is undeniable in your words..well done girl :)

[Baby Boy]

Wow! This is so beautiful gurl and I can just feel tghe luv in your heart! great write sweetie and the passion oozes off the page! One luv Miss Stina!


-JC-

[Ed Rector]

written well and expresses what it must to provide a decent poem... well done

[Albert Freeman]

Awwww now that's what I'm talking about. Baring your mind, body and soul to the one you love:)