Parades BUG me!

Something I wrote in 7th grade for english!

I looked out at the sea

and as far as I could see

there were only small waves

then I jumped with glea!!!!

For on the salty sand

was an insect marching band!

There was a Tuba, a Flute and a drum

then some ants had come

marching up with some

oddly carved sculptures

made from a peach and a plum!

 

Reviews

[la Abeja]

This is so adorable. I love the imagination behind this piece. Great write!

[East of Eden]

haha I love it! So simple and playful but how vivid! Cool.

[Ross]

cute!

[ALifeAquatic]

Such a sweet poem, I really really liked this. I agree that it is an odd poem but that is what I really like about it.

AHouseOfChambers

[Jessi Webb =)]

Odd, but cool !