When all I want to do, is think of you

A poem of how the expectations in the world can mess with a true relationship...

I see it

but feel it?

No this cannot be true.

Nature holds no Beauty to me now

and it's all because of you.

 

The words you say,

the music you

play

O how they touch me so.

Makes me think I'll love you

more than you'll ever know.

 

Then why is it that I left?

Surely we must know the answer.

Probably because of the pain

Consuming me like a cancer.

 

No, not pain because of you

But pain because of the world.

Consuming all that I have left

Pressing in, choking me,

Taking my last breath.

 

I would much rather have stayed

Safe there in your loving arms.

But to have you see me die?

That would surely  have torn my heart apart.

 

So to ease myself of the pain endured

I wring my heart dry

Stuff it in the freezer

and commence to say goodbye

 

You surely bring it out

but darkness begs to differ

 then a whisper in my ear and

POOF!

our hearts beat together.

 

A lesson to be learned

 

You can never wring love dry

or freeze a heart of fire

and

Darkness can't consume

Two hearts made of loves

desire

 

The world may take my body

my soul, my mind, my spirit

All you have to do is listen

for my heart,

Just listen, and you'll hear it.

 

I will seem to drift astray

Just know its all an illusion

My heart will be with you till the end

Through thick, thin and

Poison

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

just something I wrote , its the raw emotion part...tell me what you think

Reviews

[Voice]

Very well done!!! this piece flowed nicely and i especially love the way you ended it. Great write!!

Voice

[Satchmo's Gal]

wow. Amayzing. wonderful. Beautiful.

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Very powerful, beautiful writing. It goes to show the capacity you possess inside to feel love. It takes a special person to express themself that way. Great work!

[Wunderlich]

I think it's awesome. Excellent flow and presentation. Overall a great piece. Sehr gut =D

[Jessi Webb =)]

I love it ! Good write 1

[Jemma]

Raw emotion is one word for it. >.<
Very beautiful poem.
Great write