What I felt

Something I felt in the peace and serenity of nature.

Soul Clarity

 

Physical Endurance

Emotional Settling

(Lake of Glass, No Ripples)

 

Childs Innocence

 

Mental

                                 Simplicity

 

Wipes all thoughts away

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just some very non stressful thoughts and feelings

Reviews

[Twilight]

With the words "emotional settling", was this another way of expressing, that your emotions were moving into harmony with one another? Or simply, that you were feeling a sense of serenity and calm?

"Soul Clarity", could be interpreted as meaning that the writer has found an understanding and appreciation of the human soul. If this is the case, then that would be a blessed realisation.

In nature, people often find spiritual associations of one kind of or another. Also, particularly if one is alone, nature's beauty can sometimes be your only friend.

With your line about the "Lake Of Glass, (No Ripples)", I was reminded of tranquility, or a state of mind resting undisturbed, by the daily woes of everyday life. Thankyou, for sharing these pleasant thoughts and feelings with us!

[David W Moore III]

Ery vivid mind picture of tranquility here. Nature can do that to you.

[Not A Writer]

This poem captures everything when you said lake of glass. Nature relieves many from all the troubles of the world.

[Voice]

I like this alot and i can really see where you are coming from as i have been to this place myself many times. Beautiful write!!

Voice

[Clockwork]

You have to be able to read the lines and understand them. If you can not do this you will miss the meaning of all writing. This reminds me of a diamante in a way. There is a natural and organic peace about this poem. While I think there could have been more to the last few lines I still think it is a nice piece.

[jerr]

this is all right but i dosent seem much like a......well any thing realy it just seems like a cluster of words.