Fear

halloween night...

Darkness, shadows

Ghouls and ghosts

midnight walks full of the unknown

fear in itself is everyones fear

even to those who rarely shed tears

time and time again on one special night

most people make a game out of fright

All hallows eve is the holiday name

For those who don't know, this night didn't start out as a game

Listen to me now and I'll tell you a tale

of how this day was worshipped

and how it made some let out a frightening wail

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

The ending reminds me of an intro to an old legend. I like the juxtapositions you make in the first few lines of the poem. I think they work well.

[ace]

reminds me of an old epic poem where the author would ask a muse to help them tell a story good intro well written

[Kerwin]

Will there be a part 2 and part 3 perhaps? I love a good story.....

[Syke]

I can't quite tell whether the tone is serious or comical or what. There's a few grammatical errors, mostly relating to apostrophes. It feels kinda incomplete, like it veered off in a different direction at one point and then never quite made it to the end.

[Poeticpiers]

no tale Needs to be finished