Choices

The black night alone

the silver moon shining

all is lost, with this gain

my familiar surrounding

are forever fading

a million paths are awaiting

my return to the spirit world

or adventure to heaven

My seperation from all

and even my human breathren

Demons unknowingly causeing me pain

though I am an ali

I guess this is all I gain

the black night alone

and the silver moon shining

Reviews

[OfHopeAndHysteria]

The best line I found was:

"my return to the spirit world

or adventure to heaven..."

The use of "return" sets the tone for the rest of the line in that, you're shining light on your problematic past and promising future at the same time. Good write.

[Jane Doe]

prettty its really good well its great
i enjoyed this

[Jason]

Wow....I really like this. This title fits the poem well....in a sort of being torn between spiritual worlds.., it holds such depth and emotion...., and you paint the story with such beauty. Beautiful!

Jay

[Kerwin]

whoa...this is different. this shows a different side of you!