All I Need

About a recent break-up.

All I need is,

A little oxygen,

Because I cannot breathe anymore. 

You took my heart, 

And put it with yours. 

Two broken hearts, 

Were whole again. 

All I need is,

A little recognition,

Because I feel invisible to you. 

You told me I was beautiful,

And never let me think,

Anything different than those words.

The mirror didn't matter anymore. 

All I need is,

A little love,

Because I feel empty without you.

You filled the empty space,

In my lonely heart. 

My smile could light up, 

The darkest night sky. 

All I need is,

All of you,

Because I feel lost without you. 

Author's Note

Something I wrote while listening to music.

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I enjoyed this. The lines that stood out to me most were:

"You told me I was beautiful,
And never let me think,
Anything different than those words.
The mirror didn't matter anymore. " That is what love will do.

[zainul]

How you wrote in such a lovely way!
Reading the poem makes me passionate.
Some lines cause tears coming out of eyes.
How you wrote in such a lovely way!

[StillUnwritten]

Thank you so much!

[zainul]

You are welcome.

[Marie]

A breakup is so sad...when you've lost the nly thing you really need. Nicely written.

[StillUnwritten]

Thank you very much.

[The Watcher]

What a deep poem... Really emotional and straight from the heart. Very well written too. I hope you feel better soon, and kudos.

100/100

[StillUnwritten]

Thank you so much.

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome madam.

[StillUnwritten]

:D

[The Watcher]

=D