Revenge

Revenge

A Poem by Moonbeam Rose

She was pissed

Beyond belife

He'd done it once again

The lying cheat

Now he would pay

She stood by the bed

Dressed in stilettos, leather and lace

She was going to hurt him

Like he had her

Years of abuse down the drain

The dor opened

Her entered the room

She watched him

Like a leopard watched her pray

He turned and noticed her

Upset by the outfit

"I tod you not to dress

Like you are in charge!"

He screamed at her

She laughed

As she took a step forward

"You have no power over me."

She said as she kicked him in the balls

He fell to the floor

As she kept up with the beating

She kicked him in the legs

She punched him in the face

All of this she did

Making sure to leave her mark

Nails scratching his face

She bit him on the arms

All the while he lay helpless under her attack

He once thought that his beatings contolled her

Now her knew better

After she was done she pulled the gun

And shot him in the head

Saying in her own way- This is the end

© 2008 Moonbeam Rose


Author's Note

Moonbeam Rose
please ignore type o's

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ATG
I liked it. It was interesting. It was very good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


different kind of write........ i enjoyed it......... i just feel bad for the guy cus he thought he was gona get laid instead he gets kicked in the balls hahahaha anyway nice work...........

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JRB
Death is dark and hate even darker, and the light that was light burned dimly, yet it burned. But for how long she will ask?

Jan/uisiom


Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no problem with the typos...
thank you for sharing this piece.

Smiles,
james

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha I just read it another five times :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stickz.. I love this one and yes I am saving it, This is my favorite one and I will read this one alot if not every day!!!! Thank you!!!! i feel like a kid again I will write more in a message :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on May 9, 2008

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Moonbeam Rose
Moonbeam Rose

Santa Maria, CA



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Hey there, my name is Kat. I love to write, especially fanfiction and poetry. I am a huge Star Wars, Twilight and Harry Potter fan. I also RPG as a few characters in each aspect. I am a very proud Wic.. more..

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