Dream Lover

I sit here and wonder

As texted words fill the screen

If you are ntohing more

Than a silly old dream

Dream Lover, tell me you're real

Show me a sign

Tell me how this could be

Dream Lover, your names on my screen

But are you keeping secrets from me?

Pease don't play with my heart

Don't trample my soul

I know I am foolish

In what I am looking for

Dream Lover, take me away

To your special place

Dream Lover, make me want to stay

Careless I can be

My love for you is real

Fallen for you

I know I have

Dream Lover, give me a sign

Show me that you are really mine

Dream Lover, I want to hold you tight

All through our love filled nights

Dream Lover, I truly love you

Author's Note

pease ignore my type o's

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Very nicely written...and the title, one of my favorites by Mariah Carey! So, even that made me smile!

Dream Lover, I want to hold you tight
All through our love filled nights

I love those two lines! Actually, it almost seems like each line is a poem in and of itself and I like that very much. Great job on the writing here! Kudos.

[Charisma Moonfairy]

Everything that you write is like music to my heart. I love reading your works and for once being able to rate them as well.

[Flow]

well this one sounds like you were in my thoughts.. LOL wow very good write.. it hit home for me for another reason, and you of it.. anyway.. I think this one is tight.. great work!